ome people believe that punishment is the only purpose of the prisons, while others believes that prisons exist for various reasons.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Prisons are usually considered as a means of punishment alone but there are people who believe that prisons have various reasons to exist. We shall discuss both the views in detail.
In our society, some people hold a strong belief that the prisons are a symbol of punishment alone. Its the place where the criminals are sent as a result of their deed. Henceforth they are punished with several torturings. For example the people thinks that prison is the place where the criminal is asked to lie over an ice block and batted severely. Though it is just one mode of a procedure in the prisons mainly used for investigation, there are some misleading and misinterpreted concepts in the society. Of course the punishment would make someone to rethink before doing any second crime, but it's not all about the punishment.
However, there are other people who believes that prisons exists for various reasons. They consider the life of criminal in a prison as the time to repent and change themselves. For example, a criminal if being put in a prison for several years will be mentally depressed and physically isolated from the society. He will get enough time to have the insight and to be a better person. Moreover it gives a lesson to the whole society that if someone does a crime shall be punished. This is one of the message given to the whole human beings in our society.
So in my opinion, prisons are here to give a message to the criminal himself and to the rest of the society rather than a measure of punishment. Life in prisons also mould the criminal to a better person in the society. It's all about the responsibility of an individual to the social life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Henceforth,
...als are sent as a result of their deed. Henceforth they are punished with several torturin...
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Suggestion:
...sons. They consider the life of criminal in a prison as the time to repent and ch...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... the insight and to be a better person. Moreover it gives a lesson to the whole society ...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...inal to a better person in the society. Its all about the responsibility of an indi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'of course', 'as a result', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23197492163 0.247107183377 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.144200626959 0.155533422707 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0595611285266 0.0946595960268 63% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0470219435737 0.0501214627716 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0470219435737 0.0437548338989 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134796238245 0.122226691241 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0313479623824 0.0403226058552 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56263528745 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0407523510972 0.0326793684256 125% => OK
Particles: 0.00313479623824 0.00163938923432 191% => OK
Determiners: 0.150470219436 0.0861772015684 175% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0156739811912 0.021408717616 73% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.012539184953 0.011925033212 105% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1674.0 1933.35771543 87% => OK
No of words: 296.0 316.048096192 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65540540541 6.12580529183 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341216216216 0.374742101984 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.233108108108 0.28420135186 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.138513513514 0.203846283523 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0675675675676 0.137316102897 49% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.56263528745 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.037074148 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.56093040696 92% => OK
Word variations: 51.3766368366 60.7387585426 85% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.4117647059 20.7743622355 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.487280031 49.517814964 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4705882353 127.492653851 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7743622355 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.705882352941 0.814263465372 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 40.7225755167 49.1944974215 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.67105263158 1.69124875643 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403178208632 0.332605444948 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107373419738 0.102741220458 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0893791936402 0.0668466124924 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.534285293075 0.534860350844 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.16583764527 0.148594505496 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163872416994 0.134430193775 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763434091263 0.0742795772207 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.446949990008 0.324371583561 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0885467272956 0.0638462369009 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301357667803 0.228012699653 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511019917345 0.058150111329 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.68436873747 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 5.90881763527 17% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 9.0 2.5751503006 349% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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