"In light of the current socio-economic situation of the world, do you think this the right time for wild life preservation? If yes, what are the ways and means you suggest for this?"
Todays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the right time as well as actions of keeping wild life the same as it is and presenting it from being damaged in socio-economic circumstance of the world. However, whether this right time is suitable or not? From my perspective, I strongly believe that the wild lives are conserved in any time is also necessity, and I would suggest possible measures that community could take to conserve the wild life.The wild lives are the ecosystems in which they offer us clean air, clean water, food, and shelter. Forest removal has climatic effects, increases erosion and silts up rivers. Protection of the plant and animal, natural areas and important structures are those necessary actions. Therefore, regardless of economics or societal reason, wild life must be preserved at all time.
Nations, organizations and all the people should have co-operation and work together to effectively preserve wild life. First, some of the laws should be made to ban the killing or capturing of endangered animals or birds as also the unauthorized cutting of forest trees for timber and wood for fuel should be stopped immediately, and breeding programs for endangered species should be organized. Second, avoid using toxic chemicals, cutting plastic and never drop litter on garden/land as well as water source of us. These can kill the bugs that form the base of the food chain, leaving everyone above them without food and slowly destroyed the soil biome: the soil is depleted and cannot sustain the wild plants and tiny bugs that the food web needs.
In conclusion, various approaches could be implemented to help conserve for the wild life. Here, we should never be scrutinizing whether it is the right time for preserving wild life because any time is a good time.
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- In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 89
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 89
- In light of the current socio economic situation of the world do you think this the right time for wild life preservation If yes what are the ways and means you suggest for this 80
- In light of the current socio economic situation of the world do you think this the right time for wild life preservation If yes what are the ways and means you suggest for this 64
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 464, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ty could take to conserve the wild life.The wild lives are the ecosystems in which ...
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Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... effectively preserve wild life. First, some of the laws should be made to ban the killing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04333333333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68628409187 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603333333333 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.6526735436 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.083333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241496904498 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914214025147 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731422644911 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17595852387 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635468171732 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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