In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
These days, hundreds millions of the humans still suffer from hunger and malnutrition in the world despite the developments and breakthroughs in agricultural sector. What are causes leading to disturbing phenomenon? From my perspective, I will highlight some primary reasons for this issue and suggest possible measures that governments and anti-hunger organizations could take to solve this problem.
Let us begin by considering one of the major basic for the rise in the planet hunger is climate change. Although, farming methods are becoming more and more improved during past few decades, food production is still seriously affected by extreme weather events, such as prolonged droughts or violent storms. People are living in regions changed by these natural disasters often deficient from food shortage and famine. Moreover, the factors are wars and conflicts, which are taking place in many parts of the earth. Everyone having life in these zones are regularly forced to leave their land and move to a new terrain where they might have difficulty making ends meet.
Nations and large organizations should have co-operation and work together to effectively fight world hunger. First, early warning systems for inclement weather events should promote so that farmers have enough time to prepare coping with those events and take necessary actions to save their crops. Second, it is requires to send more experienced scientists and experts in the field of agriculture to regions often has disability climate change in order to they can do more research and find the most effective ways to improve food production in that areas. Another solution would be for United Nations and intergovernmental organizations to develop friendly relations among nations based on respect for the principle of equal rights and to take effective collective measures for the prevention and removal of threats to the peace. As well as, these organizations should introduce stricter regulations for when deal with violent attacks, social riots, conflicts and wars, which are threatening the lives of millions worldwide
In conclusion, various approaches could be implemented to help fight world hunger driven by climate change as also by wars and conflicts, which are taking place in many regions around the globe.
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 89
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 89
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 89
- In light of the current socio economic situation of the world do you think this the right time for wild life preservation If yes what are the ways and means you suggest for this 64
- In light of the current socio economic situation of the world do you think this the right time for wild life preservation If yes what are the ways and means you suggest for this 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sending'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: sending
...ave their crops. Second, it is requires to send more experienced scientists and experts...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, so, still, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40947075209 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78634806494 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618384401114 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.8115249004 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.384615385 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6153846154 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114481088508 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379069853302 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336266881218 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804459962183 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507731525095 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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