Living abroad
In recent year it has become far more normal for people to live abroad, particularly in another country in the whole world. In my opinion, this enormously popular trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.
One of the most significant benefits of living abroad is that it can be seen as positive for some reasons. On an individual level, people who choose to live abroad may not only become more self-confidence and raise cultural sensitivity but also promotes the development of communication and social skills than those who live in their place only. A young adult people who live abroad with the abundance of cultures, foods, and linguistics, for instance, will need to learn how to comfortably accommodate himself or herself to the new environment, pay the bills and manage his or her budget. Also, living abroad can give a lead in the ability to make friends in the whole world and learning a new language, all of which are valuable life skills. From an economic perspective, living abroad will completely increase transport demand for traveling and a greater demand for renting the house or apartments in which they will live with. This is likely to advantage the construction industry and estate agents, also, shopping malls, food centers, and transportation centers.
However, living abroad can be considered from the opposite views. Firstly, he or she will experience feelings of loneliness. For example, they will be away from their friends and family although it is very easier to contact their families via many internet channels such as Messenger, Viber, Zalo or making a phone call. But it’s so hard and empty to live without directly communicating with family. Secondly, in this sense, perhaps living abroad is very terrible. Secondly, from another point of views, everything can be unsettling. This is likely to many things will be very different from his or her country or buying simple things can be a real challenge like buying medicine in the hospital. Also, with the abundance of individual cultures, you will be faced with experiencing some kind of shock cultures.
In conclusion, the enormously trend of living abroad will have both beneficial and detrimental effects on people.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-12-16 | Quang Nguyen Nhat | 78 | view |
| 2018-12-12 | Nguyen Tran Quynh Thu | 67 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13114754098 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80009192633 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565573770492 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7182071058 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.470588235 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5294117647 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403709616017 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159136577837 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143149025858 0.0667982634062 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273182826126 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099034528094 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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