Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

When it comes to settling down in a foreign country individuals are said to face some obstacles. Provided this new country had a diverse language, these difficulties would be intensified. Although various approaches are utilized to categorize immigration-related problems, the main groups could be social difficulties and practical complications.
It is patently obvious that immigrants with insufficient linguistic knowledge encounter interpersonal obstacles in a new region. This could stem from the lack of communication. In fact, a person requires to be informed about cultural values and have proper language knowledge to be in contact with other. Moreover, linguistic knowledge problems can lead to cultural misunderstanding. The claim could be confirmed by the idea that there is a direct correlation between language and culture. It could be argued that culture shapes the language and is shaped by it so a person who immigrate to a country and is forced to speak a language that is differ from one's mother tongue is said to suffer from lack of communication which is rooted in cultural misunderstanding and can bring about some social problems.
Having said this, there is no doubt that linguistic illiteracy or problems not only can decline the interpersonal skills but also can result in practical issues. For example an immigrant who has to prove his abilities for finding a decent job or one who want to do a degree in a foreign country could wrestle with situation in which they cannot understand the native language. This can lead to a number of unavoidable practical obstacles such as unemployment, educational problems, etc.
On the whole, it should be noted that by developing problem solving skills and improving adaptability immigration-related difficulties can be addressed but the point which merits a mention is the fact that this procedure might be a gradual process and does not happen overnight.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When it comes to settling down in a foreign ...
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Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'individual'?
Suggestion: individual
...s to settling down in a foreign country individuals are said to face some obstacles. Provid...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'differed'.
Suggestion: differed
...d is forced to speak a language that is differ from ones mother tongue is said to suff...
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Line 2, column 655, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...to speak a language that is differ from ones mother tongue is said to suffer from la...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, as to, for example, in fact, no doubt, such as, on the whole

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31147540984 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31565067085 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.8384299391 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.615384615 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200547461418 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728468607851 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380501590264 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120019198395 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04556453094 0.056905535591 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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