Nowadays, lots of people going to abroad for their higher education as well as doing business and jobs also. They all knows about their knowledge but when they going to other country they learn their language some of them face problems but some persons are very intelligent for then it is easy to learn language because every coin has two different side. I disagree to a larger extend with the above mentioned stances because it is beneficial for that person. The reason to support my view point discuss in the upcoming paragraph.
To initiate with, there are many people who want to go other country for many purpose like education, travelling, business, jobs. Every country have different languages and different country they all try to learn foreign language but some of them stop to learn that language because it is a difficult for them. Other problem is person have to live alone in that country where he go. Last but not least, it is challenging for them to survive in foreign country because at there they have to do job, study and handling house, also. In particular, many people are going to abroad from india for further study. They live alone in abroad it is challenging for them to live and handle everything.
On spite of, I would not overlook the other side too.to begin with, living in a foreign country us a beneficial for them because for living foreign they have to learn language. It is useful for increase in knowledge of that language. In addition, it is gain data about foreign culture and how they live life. Likewise, it is increase in social life like make new friends. Also, they are traveling in new places and get information about that place.
To recapitulate, it can be finally said that despite the issue of living foreign country and speak their language is beneficial for socially as well as practically. I believe that it is useful for everyone it is not serious problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...tion as well as doing business and jobs also. They all knows about their knowledge b...
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Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'know'
Suggestion: know
... doing business and jobs also. They all knows about their knowledge but when they goi...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
... to live alone in that country where he go. Last but not least, it is challenging ...
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Line 3, column 525, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ve to do job, study and handling house, also. In particular, many people are going t...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, likewise, look, so, then, well, in addition, in particular, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75675675676 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45501694277 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48048048048 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3095656399 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1764705882 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246218010557 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824641387659 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911040699788 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170599866023 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709802613176 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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