Relocating in a strange country is one of the biggest challenges. Especially with people who do not have soft skills, social knowledge, language about that country. I totally agree with this statement.
To start with, immigrants will face "in rome, do as romans do" problem. If they have a good foreign language foundation, they will be easier in absorbing the culture of that country. By contrast, when they do not know to speak language of the country where they switch in, there will have many obstruction that they are confronted. They have difficulty in getting on with people there, or keeping up with the pace of life in there.
Additionally, in some states, especially is developed countries, it will be dangerous if they are raicially segerated. they are not only judged but also even put up with both verbal and physical violence. This will lead to feel low self-esteem, even depression.
Furthermore, dail life will become more difficult, because each country's culture is different, consist of cuisine, behavior, they seem to completely have to change their lifestyle as well as find it hard to ask for support and in practical problems.
in a nutshell, if they want to move to foreign country, they will be equipped with enough skills as well as have a good foreign language basis. Even so, in my own perspective, they also can not avoid some difficult problems
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Lucy2804
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 300, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun obstruction seems to be countable; consider using: 'many obstructions'.
Suggestion: many obstructions
...y where they switch in, there will have many obstruction that they are confronted. They have dif...
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Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...gerous if they are raicially segerated. they are not only judged but also even put u...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...for support and in practical problems. in a nutshell, if they want to move to for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, well, even so, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98275862069 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75225558778 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60775862069 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.6807450438 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9230769231 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178389063773 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660871088261 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480311303455 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10206022983 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574862212694 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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