Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extend do you agree are disagree?
It is undeniable that studying abroad or working in the countries that you have to speak their own language brings a variety of benefits. Despite the fact that a number of advantages, I believe that there are several social problems and the real-world issue can cause by living in other countries. This essay below, I will discuss that why I completely agree with this view.
The main reason why I agree is that you have problem with the language barrier. This can be explained by the fact that when you speak a language which not exactly related to your mother tongue, you usually do not speak fluently and smoothly. So native speaker will not be willing to have the conversation with you because they can not understand much about what you are talking to. For instance, in your school, students often do not start a conversation with you because they find it difficult to talk with a non-native speaker. As a result, you do not have many friends and only play with some people who also can speak the mother tongue like you. This leads to practical issues that you maybe isolated and feels depressing. You gradually becoming autistic and neglecting your study.
The second reason to support is that you will meet an obstacle in your daily activities. This problem can appear in every conversation surround you such as go shopping, go to restaurants, or even though in your school. An illustration for this is that when you go to the grocery to buy flour, but your pronunciation is not clear so they hear the wrong word which related to “flower” and gives you the wrong things.
In conclusion, there are a number of problems that you have to deal with when you study overseas or working in other countries. But if you have well-prepared preparation about learning language, I believe that you may overcome all the problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78369905956 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6976155666 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510971786834 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6065049211 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.733333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359796677887 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129368359419 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635671611463 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21207764988 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724699317501 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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