living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problem,as well as practical problems to extent what do you agree or disagree with this statement
living in foreign countries is more and more popular especially in developed countries. However when you live a country that not speak your mother tongue, sometimes you can face with social problems. i agree a part of this opinion. In this essay, i will discuss about this idea if you living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language
to start with agree, a few people do not have difficulty about communicating with others because of the fact that they are good learner in study a new language. To illustrate this opinion, i have a relative who is wonderful learning languages. Now she is in USA and can speak and understand what other people say. She does not encounter language barrier.
on the other hand, almost people have a difficulty in learning a new language so that they can have a lot of problems if they live in a foreign country. Initial they can not contact with others, at this time, as a result they can feel depressed even autism however after a long time when they try their best to improve, they can have ability enough to understand others people
in conclusion, when living a new country, almost people will have difficulties such as social problem. But if they overcome this challenge, they can take community integration very quickly and have some experience in a new country
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7012987013 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57917849152 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528138528139 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.298499452 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.6 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363404498056 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144097121377 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857974228636 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223928486736 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117209867877 0.056905535591 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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