living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problem,as well as practical problems to extent what do you agree or disagree with this statement
Living in foreign countries is more and more popular especially in developed countries. However, when you live a country that not speak your mother tongue, sometimes you can face with social problems. I agree a part of this opinion. In this essay, I will discuss about this idea if you living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language
To start with agree, a few people do not have difficulty about communicating with others because they are good learner in study a new language. To illustrate this opinion, I have a relative who is wonderful learning languages. Now she is in USA and can speak and understand what other people say. She does not encounter language barrier.
On the other hand, almost people have a difficulty in learning a new language so that they can have a lot of problems if they live in a foreign country. Initial they can not contact with others, at this time, as a result they can feel depressed even autism however after a long time when they try their best to improve, they can have ability enough to understand others people. For example, when my grandma goes to Germany to visit my uncle beacause of the high age so she does not have able to learn new language, if she want to talk something with people in here, she always need my uncle to translate to make people understand so that it makes her feel uncomfortable and she comeback Viet Nam after a week
In conclusion, when living a new country, almost people will have difficulties such as social problem. But if they overcome this challenge, they can take community integration very quickly and have some experience in a new country
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... about communicating with others because they are good learner in study a new lan...
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Line 3, column 522, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...have able to learn new language, if she want to talk something with people in here, ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63103448276 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55893900799 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527586206897 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.521177986 49.4020404114 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.090909091 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322778290927 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132859222493 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086523318749 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216733713836 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122237489834 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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