Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people around the world are going to migrate for work, study, or looking for better lifestyle. While they join to new culture, language, and area, there are lots of social and practical problems. In this essay, I'll write about the pros and cons of living overseas. After that, I'll write my opinion.
When they are going to migrate, they have to learn at least one new language. It's not enough, and they have to know something about new culture, body language, characteristics, etc. They are surprised when they see new events that they have never seen before. It's a very difficult situation when they can't ask a simple question or making friendship relation. Maybe it takes one or two years.
On the other hand, they get new experiences about new culture, lingo, and environment. Someone wants new lifestyle that is different from their motherland's one. I mean, they are going to change their lives.
Finally, in my opinion, it's a hard way with lots of problems in social and practical fields, but most problems are solved during the time by themselves.
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Suggestion: I'll
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Suggestion: It's; It is
...vents that they have never seen before. Its a very difficult situation when they ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, may, so, while, at least, i mean, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 182.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9010989011 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4927136906 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3568882045 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6153846154 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0670404408302 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0255927594797 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372404308835 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0458094854593 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352540097904 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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