Maintaining public libraries is a waste of time since computer technology is now replacing their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the unprecedented digital transformation, computers are becoming a common way for people to access information. Many believe that public libraries are therefore no longer necessary to maintain. I agree that some traditional functions of public libraries are being replaced by computer technology; however, in many modern cities, public libraries are transforming into an essential educational centre for local communities.
Since the beginning of computer technology expansion, online resources have provided people with enormous conveniences in terms of time efficiency and geographic flexibility when people need to look up information. Instead of physically borrowing from libraries, citizens can easily browse online and download the digital copy of books and articles, accessing the information at any time in their convenience. In addition, owing to computer science, digital materials can be accessible across various regions without the geographic restriction compared with the traditional libraries. For these reasons, fewer people go to libraries to borrow books or look up information due to the availability of online materials.
However, in recent years, an increasing number of modern public libraries are undergoing the revolution to become a major hub for people to access community resources and to collaborate with other citizens. For example, in Melbourne, local councils and governments offer job seeking and language training seminars through public libraries to help new arrivals of Australians to better settle down. Furthermore, some libraries enable residents to enlarge their socialisation through effective events such as photographing workshop or book sharing session, enhancing people’s sense of wellbeing. Therefore, more and more people actively attend these activities in public libraries.
In conclusion, this essay argued that although the traditional borrowing function of public libraries is gradually replaced by the internet, investing public libraries is still vital because of its revolutionarily educational function.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s revolutionarily educational function.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, look, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.09897610922 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18926959547 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61433447099 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8649421307 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.916666667 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20387801842 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742328819232 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488442340866 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128452792813 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432519835879 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.4 12.4159519038 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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