Due to the rapid growth of many metropolises, many issues occur in terms of society and the environment. There could be several consequences for this tendency and there should be some effective remedies to tackle this problem.
To commence with, there is a wide range of social and environmental problems caused by this trend. A case in point is that nowadays, to make way for housing and some skyscrapers, many forests are utterly demolished, which directly leads to the habitat loss of some animals. Another problem is that overcrowding will cause traffic congestion and the bad quality of air conditioning. Additionally, suffering from traffic jams for an extended period will make people have some diseases in their respiratory system, which directly and detrimentally affect the entire citizen's health.
Thus, to solve this issue, some effective remedies should be taken into consideration by governments and individuals. First and foremost, the authorities had better enact many strict laws. For instance, people who tend to harness forests illegally must be undergone some appropriate penalties and have to pay fines. Secondly, each individual should contribute to minimizing the consequences, caused by those problems. For example, instead of using their private cars, inhabitants should utilize public transportations, such as buses or undergrounds. Therefore, the air conditioning will be improved and the whole health of citizens will be better.
To conclude, the swift growth of many sprawling cities will cause many negative issues, that can affect directly and badly biodiversity and human beings. Thus, those aforementioned solutions should be implemented to mitigate this considerable issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 563, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6138996139 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07748408686 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617760617761 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7505257786 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.857142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0930694657292 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338078708488 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414306431523 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588416531388 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306745791944 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.