mandatory retirement. agree or disagree
there is no denying the fact that the phenomenon of ageing population is ubiquitous across the globe due to its paramount importance. While there are some strong arguments in favor of requiring judges to retire at 65 and above, many still hold that it is better to abolish mandatory retirement. this essay sheds light on the reasons for dismantling the part of this system.
Firstly, it is true that the health of older people nowadays has been becoming more decent, which led to the fact that many of them are active, productive members of the society. this is because the elderly easily have access to advanced medical services, nutrition daily diet that might enable them to maintain their health conditions. take Japan as an example, the authority has expanded the working-age of citizen because of the significant increase in citizens' life expectancy over the country. The old, who have longer longevity reaching the age of 65 and beyond, will possibly continue their employment. For this reason, the government should do away with compulsory retirement policy due to good health conditions of seniors these days.
Secondly, another benefit from abolishing mandatory retirement policy is consistency of macroeconomic performance. it is commonly argued that the old are still disqualified to working in labor force environment. this argument may be true to some extent. However, people should take into account the fact that the elderly possess the wealth of working experience, skills, hands-on and rule-of-thumps. By ceasing employment with senior employees, businesses would lose valuable human resources and expert consultancy from them. Furthermore, job holders who have worked for a long time are often the source of leadership that could inspire and guide newcomers for companies. As a result, retirement is not suitable for employees who are still capable of fulfilling their working tasks.
In conclusion, under no circumstances should people underestimate the elderly since their good physical conditions as well as valuable knowledge are two main factors that youngsters hardly enhance as mentioned above. Therefore, I strongly support that mandatory retirement should be considered to eliminate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45639534884 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8843406475 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619186046512 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0006920355 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.411764706 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35294117647 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110961363618 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039775799403 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686388053495 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747690517609 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286986188846 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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