Many adults nowadays prefer spending their free time playing computer games why do they do this?
Is this positive or negative development?
In current scenario,modern technologies have been developed as many electronic gadjects such as television, video games and computer games that people spend more time on computer while playing games.As per my opinion it is negative development because adults get addicted but their minds get active
To commence with, when people prefer to spend time on computer games they get addicted with the games and they play repetitively on computer. Moreover, if playing computer games their eyes get damaged while constantly playing games and their health is also disturbed. To examplify, when sitting constantly on chair many health problems were created like obesity, heart related problems and so on. Furthermore, adults get distracted from their studies especially the main subjects like science, mathematics and english.
Secondly, adults get unaware about other technologies and not getting much information about what's happening around the world. In addition, the lights which present in computer they affect the eyes and even they facing more problems like redness on eyes and pain on eyes. Another thing is that they get disturbed from their daily routines.
On the other hand, computer games create mind active and adults can learn how to face difficulties in hard levels and they become mentally active In various levels as they started thinking.
In recapitulation, computer games create many problems regarding health as well as daily routine so, people can do other activities in their free times.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-09-28 | myduyen282 | 73 | view |
| 2021-09-22 | sim604 | 87 | view |
| 2022-09-26 | myduyen282 | 78 | view |
- Many adults nowadays prefer spending their free time playing computer games why do they do this Is this positive or negative development 56
- The graph below shows four countries of residence of overseas students in Australia 78
- The graph below shows four countries of residence of overseas students in Australia 85
- Some people think that the government should spend more money on the public service rather than wasting money on the arts to what extent do you agree 56
- Some people think that sports teaches children how to compete while others believe that children learn team work Discuss both the views and give your opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , modern
In current scenario,modern technologies have been developed as man...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...re time on computer while playing games.As per my opinion it is negative developme...
^^
Line 1, column 299, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... get addicted but their minds get active To commence with, when people prefer to ...
^^^
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... and not getting much information about whats happening around the world. In addition...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, another thing, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42127659574 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65599418588 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565957446809 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.163268024 49.4020404114 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.555555556 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1111111111 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.6666666667 7.06120827912 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314871593932 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117309557832 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908500930639 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175240604549 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666620232666 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.