Some people think that the government should spend more money on the public service rather than wasting money on the arts to what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, authorities play an vital role in every nations.Some people think that the authority should spend huge amount of money on population requirement than arts.I totally disagree with this statement because arts represents our culture but government should spend money who belong to poor family
To commence with, arts play an important part in one to one life, arts brings creativity In individual and also increase thinking process in mind.Moreover,arts represents our culture and maintain tradition and also transfer positive energy by making paintings related arts and some motivational thoughts and also keep our mind active. Furthermore, some arts required less money so, we should control the burden on government.
Secondly, many people have skill to make any kind of arts so they can sell into market and also upload on social media and earn some handsome money through arts and for this reason we can rise the economical condition of our nation.In addition, arts are still important during religious festivals and it is important to maintain our different cultural identities and through arts we should teach traditional skills and protect historic places.
On the other hand, government should spend money on public who are financially not stable and cannot afford expensive vehicles and also those people who are defective and not able to walk and work.
In recapitulation, government should spend money on arts because arts represents our culture and brings creativity and transfer positive energy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, in addition, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41772151899 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78790264295 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586497890295 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 206.092212371 49.4020404114 417% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 256.8 106.682146367 241% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.4 20.7667163134 228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.2 7.06120827912 300% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297998390936 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188380799163 0.084324248473 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358276384848 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189360439157 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478890796229 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.8 13.0946893788 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.31 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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