Many animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions to solve this issue?
Thesedays, a lot of human activities put threatened and endangered species at higher risk of extinction. This can stem from many causes, which requires for feasible solutions to be adopted.
There are several factors reponsible for extinction of animals on land and sea. Firstly, deforesttion such as cut down enormous areas of rainforest are destroying wildlife habitats of many species of animals. As a result, this act can narrow the territory of animal, which unpexpand their population. Secondly, human activities; for example, we hunt and kill animal because using animals' skin brings huge profitable for us, including intense fishing, are altering ocean ecosystems. However, there changes are imparing the ocean's capacity to provide food, proterct livelihood and maintain clean water. Therefore, plenty animal species could not adapt to such changes.
There are multiple solution which can adopt to solve this issue. In addition, heavier sentences should be imposed on people who engage illegal logging, poaching and overfishing. This can be done by sentencign them to life imprisonment, which helps lower the number of hunters. Thus, this can protect natural habitats. Furthermore, the goverment must provide financial support to organizations that are working to help endangered species such as support breeding programs which have saved endangered animals from extinction.
In conclusion, exctinction of many species of animals results from multiple causes, and there are several actions that can be taken to address this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 523, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'oceans'' or 'ocean's'?
Suggestion: oceans'; ocean's
...However, there changes are imparing the oceans capacity to provide food, proterct live...
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Line 9, column 39, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
... There are multiple solution which can adopt to solve this issue. In addition, heavier ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69527896996 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78736118569 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643776824034 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2790317539 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7857142857 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250791079806 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084855612228 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598062418491 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152933949457 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321352092234 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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