Many animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions to solve this issue?
Despite knowing that the growing of modern age brings much changes in all around earth especially in land and sea. Human activity has been causing massive extinction of different species. In this essay, I will examine the main causes of loss a lot amount of many species and also possible solution to this problem.
The two main causes of species extinction are change of their habitats and overexploitation of natural resources. When human artificially transform the environment, they destroy vegetation and animal's natural habitat. For instance, to build road people cut down tress and cement the soil, altering the environment. Because of that, a lot species die out. Also when activities connected with capturing and harvesting a natural resource are too intense in particular area, the resource becomes exhausted. For example, too frequent finishing doesn't leave enough time for first to produce and makes them disappear.
Some possible solution to this problem are protecting natural areas and promoting awareness among people. By protecting areas where human activity is limited and avoiding overexploitation of resources, we can save the untouched environment and prevent species from dying out. Moreover, the next step in fighting the lack amount of some species is informing the general population about the dangers of this problem. This way, people will be more conscious of the environment and won't overuse or destroy it's resources.
To conclude, people's activities that change the environment have negative impact on the world's ecosystem. However, we can significantly lessen the extinction of species by protecting natural areas and enlightening people about this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...g that the growing of modern age brings much changes in all around earth especially ...
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Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...Because of that, a lot species die out. Also when activities connected with capturin...
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Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ed. For example, too frequent finishing doesnt leave enough time for first to produce ...
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Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...environment have negative impact on the worlds ecosystem. However, we can significantl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51538461538 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87887634227 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8182643507 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240625474551 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746218991186 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046984189256 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147434003452 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589420718839 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.