Animals are very precious element in the earth. Human activities are affected to decrease the plethora of animal species. This essay will discuss the problem. Why it’s happening and put on forward several solutions for this issue.
Humans act is the reason behind the extinction of animals. Firstly, the deforestation is major phenomenon. It is destroying the ecosystem of the various animals. World population is growing rapidly. Folks are cut down the trees for constructing new buildings. As the result, many forests are covert to town or village. For example, lot of residence area is build up in the hill station. So animals are losing their natural habitat. Therefore government should be provided proper apartment to the public. It will help to save the rare animal species.
Secondly, animals are facing another problem is overhunting. In many of the place people are illegally catching animals and taking their skin and meat for importing to other countries. It will lead to plenty of creature are missing out of the environment. For instance, sheepskin is used to produce leather product and soft wool also utilize for food. So, the cashmere goats are decrease in their number. Because, of this government should implement a rule against hunting beasts. The law must be heavily fined and punished. It will aid the animals to live in the world.
To recapitulate, people’s activities that change the environment have negative impact on the natural beauty. However, government needs to take sudden action whoever acts opposite to the natural habitat and individuals need to care the ecosystem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23552123552 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74540995677 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629343629344 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0519979507 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.5 106.682146367 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.7916666667 20.7667163134 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.70833333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178800427586 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456838781332 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508834751884 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104863933735 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731131375362 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.93 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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