This century, internet is the leading platform of sharing information. Nowadays the predicament of online activities is increased. This essay will discuss the problem. Why it’s happening and put forward several solutions for this issue.
Internet is given plenty of knowledge about what we need. Also it has been enormous problem. Such as hacking bank sites and entrepreneurs details. After that our economy will fall down. For example, hacking financial sites and taking all the details about the company. It goes for potentially closing the business. So the authorities should implement more defensive website security system. It will help to keep the documents in secure zone.
Secondly, some of them are sharing wrong information through internet. Sometime the victim is not related to the information. It will affect for sufferer future life. For instant, last year we saw a new. A person slept in the metro because of body pain. But in online we saw that person is drunk alcohol the reason he slept in the metro. Everybody share this fake new, at last they realize the person is not drunk alcohol. So create department for verifying each new and check it is correct or incorrect. This will facilitate to get right news.
To summarize, revolution of technology is internet. It has positive and negative side. Hacking sites and passing wrong information are increased that did not exist before. Although execute more protective security system management and make Squad to check the all news. It will aid to control the problems
- The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest? 61
- Many animal species are becoming extinct as a result of human activities.what are the causes and possible solutions to this problem? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...plenty of knowledge about what we need. Also it has been enormous problem. Such as h...
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...g bank sites and entrepreneurs details. After that our economy will fall down. For ex...
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... to keep the documents in secure zone. Secondly, some of them are sharing wrong...
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...not related to the information. It will affect for sufferer future life. For instant, last...
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...ure life. For instant, last year we saw a new. A person slept in the metro because of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14741035857 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64171968196 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 20.2975951904 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.1602167348 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.6923076923 106.682146367 47% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.65384615385 20.7667163134 46% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.19230769231 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166773173275 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428380042197 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595295459788 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102810986379 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343594305613 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.34 50.2224549098 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.11 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 9.78957915832 36% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.1190380762 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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