A substantial number of animals are on the brink of extinction which is becoming an argumentative issue, some believe that countries and individuals have the responsibility to solve this problem, while others think that human beings are also confronted with other major problems is more important. As far as I am concerned, I believe that government or individuals should pay equal attention to both sides of the problem and should consider which is more important in contemporary society.
Many animal rights advocates are convinced that animal extinction is undoubtedly the most pressing problem that deserves attention. This is largely attributed to the fact that the astonishing number of animals are on the verge of extinction due to biodiversity loss which is widely considered more detrimental than global warming, and contamination. Of crucial importance, the dramatic loss of species will also lead to the unbalanced ecosystem, particularly, affecting food chains in the natural, including humans. For example, Human hunting birds will lead to increase grasshopper species causing damage to the harvests of humans. This is clearly evidence of unbalance ecosystem, thereby threatening the existence of human beings.
On the other hand, Some issues faced by humans also have a large impact on their survival and life condition of mankind like crime, poverty, epidemics affect a large proportion of the world population. While an unbalanced ecosystem is a long-term threat for mankind, problems like basic human beings’ needs, particularly epidemics have to be addressed most urgently. In other words, saving animals on the verge of extinction would not do good to solving human beings’ problems.
In conclusion, Protecting animal also protect human because human also a part of food chains, in the ecosystem. However, Animal conservation should not come at the cost of the basic needs of humans.
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- Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out while others say that we should concentrate more on problems human beings Discuss both sides and give 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48648648649 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98569146811 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6903361343 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.333333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326491489904 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11267730203 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691561417384 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196452923038 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683043388992 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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