In the past, eating meals together is the long-standing culture of Vietnamese families, especially dinners. However, it is true that the absence of meals taken together is becoming more popular, instead, they are opting for grabbing a quick meal at the restaurants or cafeterias nowadays. As far as I am concerned, I believe that the disappearance of family meals can be explained and several negative impacts can be anticipated.
First of all, there are two reasons why the family meals becoming rarely in recent years. In most modern families, both spouses are the breadwinner to support their family's finance, hence which makes it challenging for them to have the incentive to spend time cooking and eating meals together. Some even have to undertake overtime work and do not arrive home until midnight due to the fact that earning a living so they purchase processed- food to time-saving. The second reason is that children are always busy engaged in their extracurricular activities at school or even have to attend extra classes after school, children choose the ready meals instead of returning home and eating with family.
It is easy to realize that there are dire consequences on family life and people's health. The family background is affected by lack of communication of family members, meals are taken together is the chance to strengthen their bonding, especially the disappearance of family meals can lead to unhealthy development of a child's personality in their formative years, children often exchange their thoughts and feelings as well as receive timely the guidance and advice from parents, which often take place in family meals as the way parents are educating their kids. Besides that, The long-term consumption of fast food or processed food is unhealthy for people, is a reason causing many diseases such as obesity, high blood pressure, and so on.
To sum up, there are various reasons why the lack of eating meals together becoming popular and the negative influence of this issue to the family life is undoubted.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...esity, high blood pressure, and so on. To sum up, there are various reasons why...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, however, if, second, so, then, well, such as, as well as, first of all, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13134328358 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75968494462 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561194029851 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.783516826 49.4020404114 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.272727273 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4545454545 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272780240852 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104696663393 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581391568868 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179142834408 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322909079695 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l negative impacts can be anticipated. First of all, there are two reasons why ...
^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...returning home and eating with family. It is easy to realize that there are dir...
^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...esity, high blood pressure, and so on. To sum up, there are various reasons why...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, however, if, second, so, then, well, such as, as well as, first of all, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13134328358 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75968494462 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561194029851 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.783516826 49.4020404114 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.272727273 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4545454545 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272780240852 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104696663393 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581391568868 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179142834408 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322909079695 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.