Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say
that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say that we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Protecting the environment is always a topic lead to many controversies. For some, pollution problem belongs to authorities’ responsibilities because there is not a person who can deal with these matters independently. From my perspective, I completely agree with whose opinions.
In terms of domestic issues, it is clear that only lawmakers could resolve a variety of environmental problems in their nation such as deforestation, discharging greenhouse gas by imposing a strict ban to the public. this, in an aspect, can raise awareness of people about the impacts of contamination, and on the other side, will obligate public into a law frame. For instance, to cut down the carbon dioxide emissions, Singapore's government has proposed a regulation about restricting personal vehicles commute to inner city. As a result, people must use mass transport to travel instead of their habits before.
Furthermore, for the international problems, with a realistic look, a person can not be efficient in comparison with authorities who have a significant influence on global politics and cooperation. For example, in the Rio de Janeiro earth Summit, politicians from top countries in the world attended and reached an agreement in order to take their international commitment about preventing climate change, otherwise, reinforcing collaboration amongst nations. In addition to this, as we could have seen the accomplishment of earth Hour campaign on the world, obviously, social activists’ contributions have created more effective results and appeals from humans than individuals.
In conclusion, from my personal view, I believe that for a worldwide issues governors play an essential role to deal with this, besides, everyone should observe the law because conserving the natural environment is human’s responsibilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 218, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...by imposing a strict ban to the public. this, in an aspect, can raise awareness of p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, look, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86181818182 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4767706114 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9820501427 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.545454545 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124181125693 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433288723734 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284300197912 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071818064427 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158956022267 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.0 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.79 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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