In ecological cycle, every entity has own importance; however, several creatures declined day by day. Many reasons are behind it why this is happening and certain solutions can be considered to mitigate it that will be discussed in ensuing paragraphs.
To begin, there are certain reasons of extinction of animals that could be put forth.The first and foremost one is that deforestation.To explain, nowadays people live with high a standard lifestyle such as spacious abode, appealing interior which is basically made from wood, in order that to complete their fulfilment they are doing more and more logging activities; as a result numerous animals become homeless.Not only that but also, human beings are poaching animal due to their fondness.In addition, those creatures who are in zoo , they have not proper surveillance and environment for them ; therefore, they are being a victim of malnutrition.Hence, they are confronting towards death.
Certain measures can be considered as a solutions that could be put forth.The prime one is that create laws against killing animal.That is to say, there must be laws in the constitution of country against killing any animal so that certain people who have fondness of poaching animal can be prevented.What is more, awareness needs to spread among the citizenry to about the importance of that species in order to achieve that several NGOs need to come forward to create centuries in the country to cater the creatures.For instance, lion can be seen only certain region like forest of Africa and Gir at Gujarat,India; therefore, government of Gujarat declares more and more centuries of lion to preserve it.Thus, people need to be encouraged.
To recapitulate, there are several reasons which are discussed above , are causing this problem to overcome it people should spread awareness towards animal and they should create certain places where animal can take breath of relief.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, what is more, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31045751634 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96857085831 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 276.559288399 49.4020404114 560% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 325.0 106.682146367 305% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.2 20.7667163134 295% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.2 7.06120827912 385% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24077669477 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130363633195 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896633188985 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142962075205 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357010035957 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.2 13.0946893788 261% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.1 50.2224549098 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.41 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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