In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
In contemporary era, everything is improving day by; on an average, expectancy of life is increasing all over the world in order that certain problems will arise for mankind and community, however, certain key that could be considered to mitigate the influence of ageing populations that will be discussed in ensuing paragraphs.
To begin, some problems which are caused by rising the life's duration that could be put forth.The first and foremost one is that overpopulation.To explain, nowadays, many campaigns about how to control population are being run due to overpopulation and ultimately, growth of population invites more competition in different sectors such that job sector and like that.Not only that, but also lack of employment will rise because of overpopulation; as a result, many employees will be wandering caused by this problem.What is more, scarcity of food will take place in this picture of this predicament in order that many unwelcome situation will arise such as dearness and recession.Hence, longevity may offer certain difficult situation.
Garden has not only weed but also it has some smelly flowers, similarly, it has solution as well.The prime one solution is that entrepreneurs of the country should be encouraged.That is to say, employer should be supported to get more funds. Consequently, they are able to provide more employment by supporting government to them to create a large enterprise which is accommodate numerous employees.Furthermore, most of countries are depended on the agriculture sector.If government body of that country assist them, they can get ahead in economic sector, definitely. For instance, 70 percent people of India are stand on agriculture ,if they can get incentive about agriculture field by authority of India, they may be get one step up in affluence.Thus, this matters may consider as solution of problems.
To recapitulate, longevity of people invites more problems which could be solved by some keys which are discussed above, if people establish them and take it seriously.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39252336449 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28951606564 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570093457944 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 186.010453709 49.4020404114 377% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 288.5 106.682146367 270% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.5 20.7667163134 258% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.8333333333 7.06120827912 380% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245788802412 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112738080646 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094095352302 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155304402148 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863768305937 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.7 13.0946893788 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.87 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39252336449 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28951606564 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570093457944 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 186.010453709 49.4020404114 377% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 288.5 106.682146367 270% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.5 20.7667163134 258% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.8333333333 7.06120827912 380% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245788802412 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112738080646 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094095352302 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155304402148 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863768305937 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.7 13.0946893788 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.87 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.