In many cities, many people are living in large apartment blocks. Does this accommodation have more advantages or disadvantages?
Living in condominiums has become a trend in many cities around the world. I believe, that although there are benefits, the drawbacks is more as residents are highly risk to fire incidents and the place is not conducive for growing family.
One of the main advantages of tenants residing in high rise apartment is that there is a landlord. The caretaker id responsible for the repairs and maintenance of the unit. This saves the individual ampule amount of time searching and contacting laborers to fix a leaking faucet or broken window. Another benefit is that people can easily downsize when budget is insufficient. Apartment rent varies depending on its location and square area, so, tenants, have a choice to move in a smaller or higher floors if they are financially challenge. In addition to that, young professionals, who are starting their careers in the city may find it economical to stay in sharing apartments.
On the other hand, there are also disadvantages in this living condition. Firstly, the people are at greater risk to fire accidents and injuries. A recent news in CNN involves a high condominiums swallowed by fire affecting more than 100 families with reported deaths. Secondly, the space in each unit is not enough for a family of three or more. There is a less space to move around, exercise or play and family members are often left irritated if their personal space is constantly invaded. Lastly, rules and regulations in the building comprises of long list that needs compliance to avoid unnecessary termination of contract.
In conclusion, regardless of the benefits, the drawbacks of living in high-rise apartments can be devastating in the event of fire incidents as well as in the mental health of the family members.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02397260274 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8829413155 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609589041096 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4949223178 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169572398075 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501582946592 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489001251169 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897921605855 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203010146356 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.