In the present era, residing in apartment buildings has been raised in majority of masses.Therefore, advancements and choices are getting huge turnover in modernisation world. In my opinion, this statement reveals both pros and cons as expression.
Firstly, dwelling in condo uplift fraternize amongst enormous population thereby getting in touch with different sorts of people from other cultures and languages to mingle with each other and sharing thoughts. For instance, if Japanese are logging in condo with an Indian then they both can learn their language and culture to celebrate their festivals together and deal equally in any horrendous situation. Secondly, apartments offer heaps of amenities for being situated in the heart of the city especially transportation, shopping and so on. Besides, security,saving time and money play crucial role for habitation.
On the other hand, apartments accomodation has got some drawbacks depict the shortage of space for extended family that can cause frustration namely not much room for strolling and playing for kids. In addition, noisy neighbourhood atmosphere and altercation can get through serious consequences.
To sum up, for getting residency in apartments heavily depend upon people’s own decisions and preferences withholding both positive and negative aspects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , saving
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79187817259 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15234556943 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.725888324873 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4683169952 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.777777778 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06120827912 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0664620527159 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0274312594067 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024008394578 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0422492558172 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150324659854 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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