In many cities today, most people live in large apartment blocks. Does this kind of accommodation have more advantages or disadvantages?
Public’s lifestyle has undergone a huge alteration in the last few decades, and their housing is not an exclusion. These days, the majority of individuals are living in apartment complexes; albeit, the opinions on this issue vary widely, and both positive and negative arguments can be made which will be discussed in detail in this essay.
One the one hand, there is no denying that there are numeral merits associated with living in houses rather than apartments. First and foremost, the most imperative benefit obtained from having such lifestyle might be the unfettered access given to people preferring living in private residences, ranging from the ability to have a swimming pool in the yard to being unconstrained to hold lively parties. Moreover, living in a house can occupy a leading role in developing children’s physical skills. It can easily be illustrated by making a comparison between the children living in apartment blocks virtually captivated in their rooms with their peers whose house offer them the possibility to spend their leisure time having physical pursuits.
Being oblivious to potential pros related to accommodating in houses is truly short-sighted; however, we cannot be indifferent to the advantages of living in buildings. People have chosen to live in apartments usually subscribe to the idea that living in an apartment seems to be a way more safer option compared to living all alone. This argument makes sense since complexes often tend to be guarded by sorts of security forces. In addition, living in apartments might fulfil habitants dire need to having maintained their units due to the fact that the residents pay a certain amount of money on a monthly basis, so the odds are that a service company probably take care of any unprecedented predicament interwoven to their accommodation.
Taking all above-mentioned points into consideration, we can arrive at an inevitable conclusion that the advantages of living in an apartment can merely outweigh the possible disadvantages, as owing to the convenient lifestyle it tends to offer to its habitats.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
...iving in an apartment seems to be a way more safer option compared to living all alone. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29761904762 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04773530284 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610119047619 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.3763084696 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.818181818 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5454545455 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207769241907 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775226826896 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596396303247 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120390899986 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533672571681 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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