Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that it is good thing, while others think that it has disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this contemporary era, most firms finance sports to introduce themselves. Some individuals argued that it is right thing, however others opine that it has drawbacks. I am in favour of former notion and this essay will articulate both views of the argument in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with a first side, it is beneficial for both firms sale and players if companies sponser sports. In other words, if companis would fund the sports international as well as domestic tournament, then they can increase sale of their products by advertising in the games and sportsperson can received handsome money by sponsoring goods of any industry. Hence, not only commercial organisation can rise their goods sales, but also palyers can get a lot of money by advertising the products.
On the flip side, people can be influenced to buy non useful products for them. To elaborate it, mases can purchase that products which seem to be not beneficial for them due to following the famous sports players. For instance, some firms advertise the false products such as, skin care, fitness and they introduce that products by advertise from players. In case, if people would buy false products, then they will face harzardous results by using them. As a result, companies as well as players can lose their popularity by sponsoring the false products in games.
To conclude, although, it is beneficial for firms to increase their sales by sponsoring the sports yet it is also has disadvantages that may reduce the popularity of both company and player.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a first side, it is beneficial for both firms sale and players if companies spon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, then, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05836575875 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78195694981 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548638132296 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.802254712 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172205257292 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656928586526 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362423980036 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11311234893 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216386088746 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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