Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that it is good thing, while others think that it has disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that it is good thing, while others think that it has disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own o
In this contemporary era, most firms finance sports to intruduce themselves. some individuals argued that it is right thing, however others opine that it has drawbacks. I am in favour of former notion and this essay will articulate both views of the argument in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with a first side, it is beneficial for both firms sales and players if companies sponser sports. In other words, if companis would fund the sports international as well as domestic tournament, then they can increase sale of their products by advertising in the games. While, sportsperson can received handsome money by sponsoring goods of any industry. Hence, not only commercial organisation can rise their goods sales, but also palyers can get a lot of money by advertising the products.
On the flip side, people can be influenced to buy non useful products for them. To elaborate it, mases can purchase that products which seem to be not beneficial for them due to following the famous sports players. For instance, some firms advertise the false products such as, skin care, fitness and they introduce that products by advertise from players. In case, if people would buy false products, then they will face harzardous results by using them. As a result, companies as well as players can loose their popularity by sponsoring the false products in games.
To conclude, although, it is beneficial for firms to increase their sales by sponsoring the sports yet it is also has disadvantages that may reduce the popularity of both company and player.
In this contemporary era, most firms finance sports to intruduce themselves. Some individuals argued that it is right thing, however others opine that it has drawbacks. I am in favour of former notion and this essay will articulate both views of the argument in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with a first side, it is beneficial for both firms sales and players if companies sponser sports. In other words, if companis would fund the sports international as well as domestic tournament, then they can increase sale of their products by advertising in the games. While, sportsperson can received handsome money by sponsoring goods of any industry. Hence, not only commercial organisation can rise their goods sales, but also palyers can get a lot of money by advertising the products.
On the flip side, people can be influenced to buy non useful products for them. To elaborate it, mases can purchase that products which seem to be not beneficial for them due to following the famous sports players. For instance, some firms advertise the false products such as, skin care, fitness and they introduce that products by advertise from players. In case, if people would buy false products, then they will face harzardous results by using them. As a result, companies as well as players can loose their popularity by sponsoring the false products in games.
To conclude, although, it is beneficial for firms to increase their sales by sponsoring the sports yet it is also has disadvantages that may reduce the popularity of both company and player.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...r products by advertising in the games. While, sportsperson can received handsome mon...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r products by advertising in the games. While, sportsperson can received handsome mon...
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
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...esult, companies as well as players can loose their popularity by sponsoring the fals...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, then, well, while, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 7.85571142285 318% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3301.0 1615.20841683 204% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 641.0 315.596192385 203% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14976599064 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0316973083 4.20363070211 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75635081712 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.324492979719 0.561755894193 58% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 981.9 506.74238477 194% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 16.0721442886 236% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7172709271 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8684210526 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8684210526 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36842105263 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 3.4128256513 440% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26890441749 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707280116344 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858042494136 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981623987884 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183817328022 0.056905535591 323% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dvanced
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Line 17, column 78, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...finance sports to intruduce themselves. some individuals argued that it is right thi...
^^^^
Line 19, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a first side, it is beneficial for both firms sales and players if companies spo...
^^
Line 19, column 283, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r products by advertising in the games. While, sportsperson can received handsome mon...
^^^^^
Line 21, column 503, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...esult, companies as well as players can loose their popularity by sponsoring the fals...
^^^^^
Line 26, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a first side, it is beneficial for both firms sales and players if companies spo...
^^
Line 26, column 283, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r products by advertising in the games. While, sportsperson can received handsome mon...
^^^^^
Line 28, column 503, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...esult, companies as well as players can loose their popularity by sponsoring the fals...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, then, well, while, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 7.85571142285 318% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3301.0 1615.20841683 204% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 641.0 315.596192385 203% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14976599064 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0316973083 4.20363070211 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75635081712 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.324492979719 0.561755894193 58% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 981.9 506.74238477 194% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 16.0721442886 236% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7172709271 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8684210526 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8684210526 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36842105263 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 3.4128256513 440% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26890441749 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707280116344 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858042494136 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981623987884 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183817328022 0.056905535591 323% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.