In many counties these days, the number of people continuing education after school has increased, and the range of courses available at universities has also increased.
do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays all around the world, the number of people who want to acquire post-secondary education has dramatically increased, in addition, the number of courses suggested by universities increases too. Whereas some people questioning these changes I consider advantages are outweighing disadvantages.
At first, the amount of well-educated people may increase the consciousness of all humanity and populations in different countries. it can make more people to be engaged in policy, both domestic and international, and prevent performance in a life of some reforms or decisions, which may contain hidden disadvantages for the population. The high number of people with university degrees makes it way more difficult for dishonest governments to fool their own nation in order to have some illegal benefits.
Also, the education system is one of the foundations of society and its influence spreads way more than just for the questions of education itself. Because of its fundamental nature, it affects every side of society further, such as science, healthcare, army, administration. Consequently, as the number of people proceeding for higher education increases, the amount of professionals involved in these fields of social activities is getting bigger accordingly.
However, despite we have such advantages as described above, some disadvantages exist. The tendency of getting higher education decreases the number of people who want to continue their lives without the high degree but graduate just as professional workers. In the future, when the labour market will be fulfilled with high degree specialists, might appear the lack of professional workers. As a result, there will be some problems in the sphere of production, such as the reduction of quality and quantity of products for example. this situation will affect all sides of our life because we are living in the industrial age.
In conclusion, although different obstacles are implicated in the enormous number of the educated people, the benefits of it outweigh the negative sides of it.
- Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
- In many counties these days, the number of people continuing education after school has increased, and the range of courses available at universities has also increased.do you think this is a positive or negative development? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ferent goals in the life. In my opinion, work passion could motivate people great...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...care which will secure their future. Although, It is also arguable that people should...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17870722433 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54117589418 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627376425856 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9052049605 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152409695658 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540322329076 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412876590702 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957136315353 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421488845541 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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