According to some people, job satisfaction is more crucial than earning well, while others believe that a high amount of income is needed to fulfil personal needs and reach different goals in the life. In my opinion, work passion could motivate people greatly, then the amount of money a person earns, especially in the time perspective.
There are some arguments for finding jobs with decent salaries. First of all, the living cost becomes more expensive day by day, that requires people to get jobs offering high salaries which allows them to pay mortgages, bills and buy essential goods. Secondly, because of a high amount of income people could improve their quality of life by purchasing more decent apartments, vehicles and different extras. Finally, those people can ensure that their children will receive a high-quality education and medical care which will secure their future.
Although, It is also arguable that people should have well-paid jobs. The main reason is if employees get jobs suited to their character and ambitions, they will work hard and express their creativity at their position. Therefore, they can have the opportunity to get promoted. Another reason is that in the case to be well-paid, they have to spend up to twelve hours each day doing such jobs. That can lead to reducing their spare time, which they could spend with their family members. Also, long work hours could sow mental health issues such as stress or depression.
In conclusion, despite the advantages of taking jobs with decent salaries, it seems important to me to prioritise job satisfaction above being well-paid.
- Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
- In many counties these days, the number of people continuing education after school has increased, and the range of courses available at universities has also increased.do you think this is a positive or negative development? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 549, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...al care which will secure their future. Although, It is also arguable that people should...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12878787879 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52189676019 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3719669467 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.153846154 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152591420029 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542183182508 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374761432793 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958527507005 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421729831326 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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