Evidently, growing population become a main issue in many countries followed by the increase in new homes need. However, the topic emphasizes whether new dwellings should be constructed in existing cities or in countryside. I strongly concur with the idea of building new towns and now this essay will examine the both views.
Undoubtedly, many metro cities in different countries are highly populated. Constructing new accommodations in high dense cities will generate many problems related to the lack of basic needs such as water and land which increase the living cost. For instance in Surabaya, the average of living cost and properties are much higher than any other suburbs area in East Java, Indonesia. Additionally, in line with the increase in housing, the amount of vehicles will rise significantly causing worse traffic congestion and air pollution. The real example of traffic and pollution issue is happening in Jakarta which populated with over 10 million people that have the 5th worst traffic and air pollution level globally.
On the other hand, expanding accommodations in countryside will provide more benefits such as cheaper cost of land, higher quality of water supply and healthier living environment. Moreover, the other facilities can be built along with the residentials including entertainment and business giving more chance for villagers to find job. In addition, the business investors can also hire cheaper labor and resources which beneficial for economic growth of the country.
To sum up, expanding housing needs in countryside will give more positive impact to the quality of life of the inhabitants and also give more economic prosperity for the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'suburbs'' or 'suburb's'?
Suggestion: suburbs'; suburb's
...operties are much higher than any other suburbs area in East Java, Indonesia. Additiona...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39473684211 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86046749584 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4965794274 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.583333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28494862907 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978405005578 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967274794322 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17091679011 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149797732905 0.056905535591 263% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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