In many countries around the world life expectancy is increasing Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion Write at least 250 words

Increasing life expectancy is a common phenomenon in many countries around the world. Society might never be able to settle this dispute but, personally, I am of the opinion that the adverse impacts are more reasonable.

When it comes to advantages, firstly, with longer life expectancy, people have more time to enjoy their lives and engage in activities that they may not have had the opportunity to do before. This can lead to an overall improvement in the quality of life. Moreover, longer life expectancy can also bring economic benefits to a country. An aging population means more demand for healthcare services, which can create job opportunities in the healthcare sector. Increasing life expectancy also means an improved productivity. Older individuals can bring a wealth of knowledge and experience to the workplace.

On the other hand, this change could be detrimental in terms of economic and social issues. Longer life expectancy can lead to increased healthcare costs. As people age, they are more likely to require medical attention, which can put a strain on healthcare systems and increase the cost of healthcare for individuals and society as a whole. Another point worth noting is increased life expectancy can also put pressure on pension systems. As people live longer, they require a longer period of retirement, which puts a strain on pension funds and can make it difficult for governments to maintain sustainable pension systems. Social issues such as ageism and elderly neglect can additionally be the results of this change. Older individuals may be seen as a burden on society and may face discrimination in the workplace and in other areas of life.

In conclusion, it is clear that while this development has ensured several necessary changes, it has also made society vulnerable to some unpleasant ones. It is important for governments and society to address the challenges that come with an aging population and work towards creating a society that supports individuals of all ages.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22085889571 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92040650172 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521472392638 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1350146801 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.117647059 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145418558341 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658293562891 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851638771219 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109696787288 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841906702931 0.056905535591 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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