In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.
Write at least 250 words.
Recently, medical technologies development has increased rapidly, which makes human’s longevity increased a lot. Although there are many merits of living longer, the number of downsides of this problem is considerable. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the problem, as well as giving my thought.
On the one hand, the increase in the length of life offers some considerable benefits. First, many people can have more time to fulfill their wishes and desires. Most people spend insufficient time on hobbies at their young ages due to the large amount of work they have to do for their family economics. Moreover, people living longer can benefit for a longer time from the wisdom handed down to them by older members of their families. Therefore, when they can live longer, they will be able to achieve their ambition, doing the activities which they do not have time to do at their earlier ages.
However, the rise of longevity can cause several problems. As you are staying alive longer, you will have to suffer from many of the permanent sickness. You will need more medical care, turning yourself into a burden for not only your family but also for the whole society. Health issues, particularly chronic health problems like diabetes and back pain, are more common in older individuals. If an older person is unable to do many of the activities that they want to do, it could lead to the likelihood of depression and a deterioration in their physical health.
In conclusion, the increase of life expectancy has both benefits and drawbacks as your mental and physical strength decreases greatly as the longer you live. But in my opinion, its advantages can easily outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'technologies'' or 'technology's'?
Suggestion: technologies'; technology's
Recently, medical technologies development has increased rapidly, whic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01742160279 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70305585304 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578397212544 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9864618695 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13690038166 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052512469005 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531328817103 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106402925046 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680153939092 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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