In many countries around the world the lofe expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.
Since the quality of life of people in developed countries is getting better people have been liveing longer periods than their ancestors used to. However, what benefits could it bring to our society and in turn what are its drawbacks? While I do believe it has many advantages in many ways I think the cons of this outweighs them in the long term.
On positive sides, more elderly people living around us in our society the more chances of learning from their rich experiences. People aee living longer , it means most of them have gone through a lot of difficulties and changes during their lifetime which all could be valuable lessons for young generation. For instance, we build the future based on past experiences of wrong decisions and conpelling ones in which elderly members of the society play an important role preventing us from making costly mistakes and giving us directions based on their rich backgrounds.
Not only that, increase in life expectency could also mean lots of economic benefits to a country. Because the population grows in numbers so are the regular tax payers and service users. Last but not least, parents who are in their 30th or 40th have a lot to do which is why they can not spend much time to bring up their children. This duty is left up to grandparents who are a source of wisdom and teach the young generation moral values.
Turning to dusadvantages, as people are expected to live longer the population goes up which creates both environmental and economic issues. Firsly, the more people living in a country implies more wastes that have been greatly deteriorating the envuronment. Moreover, although increase in life expectancy can bring lots of benefits to the economy it comes with its own destructive effects for the economy. Because the governments have to give away huge amount of money for pensioners that could obviously cause some funding shortages. As a reslut, country's prosperity slows down because of not being able to subsidise money for other areas to develop a country and increase the income.
To sum up, rise in life expectency has both advantages and disadvantages. I personally thing that the negative outcomes of this change are more destructive to the economy and the surroundings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, as to, for instance, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95778364116 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71516083095 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564643799472 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.919349159 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.529411765 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2941176471 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13766185749 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456964669759 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417066058199 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079658230767 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363492463402 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.