In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
There is no denying that today people who are living in rural areas move to urban regions and as a result the number of residents in the countryside declines. Due to these movements, both the cities and the villages are suffering a lot. Hence, I strongly believe that this matter is seriously a negative trend.
To begin with, the flow of people from regional to metropolitan areas has a negative impact on their quality of life. Firstly, overpopulation can lead to lack of facilities, accommodation, and unemployment. This means that with a limited amount of space to build houses and other infrastructures, a growing population is likely to lead to an increased cost of living. In many cities, it is almost not possible for people with average salary jobs to live there. Secondly, the mortality rate, especially in poor countries, is likely to increase due to overpopulation. With an increasing number of people, everyone has to fight harder to get enough food. Those who are not able to do that will be left behind, which results in an increased mortality rate. For example, India is one of the most populous countries in the world. The World Bank estimates that this country will need to invest $840 billion in urban infrastructure over the next 15 years to meet the needs of its growing population.
On the other hand, overpopulation has a vast adverse effect on the environmental system. Since people have to produce large amounts of food to provide for their survival, they have to use more land and resources to accomplish this. This comes with deforestation which leads to a decline in the variety of species. In addition, in order to produce more goods for daily lives, a bigger amount of fossil fuels is needed. Burning fossil fuels lead to the emission of harmful chemicals and acid rain. This contributes to the global warming issue. Furthermore, a combination of overcrowded living conditions and malnutrition in conjuntion with low hugienic standards can lead to severe epidemics or pandemics. This problem will be especially severe for poor people in developing counties since they lack the money to afford medical treatment.
In conclusion, since this migration process breaks the balancing factors between metropolitan areas and rural areas, and causes many serious problems, this must be considered as a bad development in certain countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ive trend. To begin with, the flow of people from regional to metropolitan are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08717948718 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93578434448 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2505754787 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4761904762 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61904761905 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206143544481 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051420240535 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456181811651 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125612164224 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339356178347 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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