In many countries around the world young people decode to leave their parents home once they finish school. They start living in their personal homes or sharing homes with their friends. Do you agree or disagree?
Youngsters are the future of the every nation. Therefore, youngsters take a decision to start living alone for their upcoming studies. So this essay will analyse the some positive and negative views behind this trend along with my opinion in the upcoming paragraph.
According to the first school of thoughts, there are myriad aspects which describes the positive trend behind the youngsters decision. first, these days students have a lot pressure about their education so it is better for the students to take a decision to live alone and start their best education without any kind of disturbance. Not only this, with this decision they get to know about their hidden abilities as well as they are becoming self-reliant. Further, when they are alone in their home so they are starting to know the value of their parents in their life so it can a best way to enhance the moral values in the youngsters.
According to the second school of thoughts, living outside from the home is worst for the youngsters. The prime one is that, when students are living isolate so they are facing so many problems in their life but they can't share their menace with their parents. Furthermore, these days living in the rent houses are becoming very expensive so it affects their budget as well. Moreover, crimes are very exaggerated in the urban areas so it is also the one of the biggest problem to living outside.
In my opinion, living alone is the best decision by the youngsters because they are becoming self-dependent as well as living alone is the better way to pursuing higher studies. As they are living in the sharing homes with their friends so it can enrich their understanding ability and they know the value of the sharing and caring of the relationships.
Overall, after a lot of thoughts and deliberation it is true to say that youngsters plays the crucial role in the progress of any country. So it is totally depend on students to take a decision whether it is better to live with parents or living alone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56252585851 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442857142857 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8727839668 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.533333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330984137437 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120918851178 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11239353592 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198172790916 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10446506952 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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