In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion on this?
In today’s modern world child labour is very common. In many nations children are engaged in aome kind of paid work. Some people think that this method is completely wrong, while others consider it as good work experience which is important for learning and taking responsibility. I will briefly discuss my views in the upcoming paragraphs before giving logical conclusion.
In the poor country like The Democratic Republic Of Congo, where the small children have to work forcefully due to not having the sufficient amount of money to work. There are some other reasons aslo why they like to work. The very first reason is to cover up the financial expanses. The second reason is they can buy the things they like. The third reason is they like to earn more; now, they do not want to study anymore.
The government should make a new law for the children such as, during studies they are not allowed to do any kind of part time jobs. However, the government should provide free education to all the poor children living in the country; also the organisation should conduct a seminar to influence the poor families so that they send their children to school. By studying in school they can achieve their big goals. Moreover, they will never face any kind of difficulties in life.
In conclusion, we know that children get the practical knowledge by doing the paid work but, that is the age for them to do work. Instead of work they can learn variety of courses which will help them in jobs. The children should mainly focus on studies not in work.
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- In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion on this? 61
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...d reason is they like to earn more; now, they do not want to study anymore. ...
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Suggestion: part-time
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, third, while, in conclusion, kind of, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79044117647 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42691618012 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580882352941 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.8149309319 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4375 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290193945179 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984727488386 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133079085055 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194085008983 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14576718615 0.056905535591 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.