In many countries the cost of living is rising. What are the effects on individuals and society? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?
It is apparent that the expenditure which residents have to spend on living is significantly increasing. While it is obvious that this trend exerts many negative impacts on both customers and society, there are many initiatives to cope with this problem.
In terms of the effects of this trend, I think that this trend causes many negative impacts on both buyers and society. Firstly, the price escalation in living costs can significantly impact on customers, especially the grass roots. For example, people who are poverty-stricken have to struggle with sweated labour to possess essentials such as food and clothes. Secondly, society possibly has to shoulder a heavier burden of unemployment benefits and migration of labour. If the living cost rises, it is clear that many companies would contract their business. Consequently, more employees can be fired to maximize profit. In addition, many nations have to deal with complex and uncontrollable migrations both legally and illegally, in which many people believe that they would have better job prospects in other places to meet increasingly their daily demands.
However, this trend can be alleviated by many efficient measures. One of the solutions is that relentless efforts of scientists to find out more technological breakthroughs in manufacturing, which drop the price of domestic products down. For example, in the results of the recent advances in energy technology which have helped people use effectively electricity converted from the sunshine, the living expense is allocated for electricity can be decreased domestically. Another remedy is that governments should adopt more rigorous set of efficient and accountable regulations to solve the financial problems which potentially contribute to the increase of inflation.
In conclusion, it is clear that the residents have to spend more money on their living costs. While I believe that both individuals and governments are influenced by this trend, it can be taken over by the efforts of both authorities and scientists.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46687697161 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07408676744 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548895899054 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3127460265 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.533333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263425142812 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863995672404 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554007584271 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16277696847 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330246455416 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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