it is true that in many countries around the world, it is becoming more and more difficult for people to make meets end, due to the rise in living cost. While the effects of this problem on individuals and the society are tremendous, I believe there are steps the government could take to tackle this issue.
To begin with, the rise of the living cost can have many effects on individuals and the society, most of which are negative. Firstly, rising in living cost means that many poor people in the countryside will have to struggle to pay for their lives. Therefore, they tend to leave their hometown and move to big cities with a hope to have a good job that can help them to make meets end. This will lead to overpopulation in big cities and many related problems such as higher crime rate, pollution and pressures on the public healthcare system. Secondly, in terms of individuals, they are faced with higher prices for their daily necessities such as food and renting bills. This means that if they do not work harder or work overtime to get promotion and increase their income, they would not be able to support themselves and their families. As a consequence, many workers would be under more pressure at work and would have less time for themselves and their families, not to mention recreational activities. In the long run, this may cause many workers to suffer from negative feelings as well as stress-related diseases.
However, there are some viable solutions that the authorities could take to support their citizens. The first one is to put lower tax on basics products that people may use every day such as food and transport. For example, in Vietnam, the tax of food such as rice, meat and vegetables is only 3% to help people in poverty to afford daily meals. Another solution is for the governments to have a long-term economic plan, which will greatly help to increase citizens’ income and living standard and stop living costs from rising.
In conclusion, although
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77167630058 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58000553247 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528901734104 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4162175177 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.066666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0666666667 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222762574617 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732254800852 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740700136965 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116585073102 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934190940846 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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