The Availability of good school and Medical facilities should not be confined to only City but also to Rural areas of the country as these two aspects are very important for the development of the people in those areas. One reason for this is the Easy availablity of other Linked sources required for the set up of hospitals and Schools in cities which is not available in rural areas and has to be transported from City again.
It becomes social responsibility for the individual who decides to take up the profession in teaching and doctor to work for the well being and growth of the society regardless of their Profit or salary and hence these Two profession are considered sacred and respected by all. In my opinion teachers and doctors should take up service in rural areas by themselves and not out of compulsion where they are more valued and needed.
Tution System is also very common in cities, even after Joining School many students rely on tution notes and materials for their academic performance. However, Same is not the case for students of rural areas and they learn everything from Less facilitated School and teachers. Similarly, Expensive,advanced medical facilities and practitioners are available only in cities whereas hospital in rural areas doesn't have basic medicine and facilities.
There are enough number of teachers and doctors who can work on rotational basis to service in both rural and urban area's. This way everyone will be given fair and equal chance to work for themselves in urban and also help the poor and undeveloped part of the country.
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- Some people prefer activities and lifestyle in hot climates while others prefer activities and lifestyle in cold climate. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , advanced
...chool and teachers. Similarly, Expensive,advanced medical facilities and practitioners ar...
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Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... cities whereas hospital in rural areas doesnt have basic medicine and facilities. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, similarly, so, well, whereas, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98876404494 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72638596581 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550561797753 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8952045333 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.0 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331132418351 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130086734506 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589145976254 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179946708749 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400873040164 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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