People in earlier times used to lead a healthy and long life, as there was pure and unadulterated food, unpolluted and fresh air in the environment to breathe. The Average life span of a normal human being then used to around 95-100 years unlike in today's generation it is 80-85 years.
People now a days are falling ill at an very early stage of their life and are getting exposed to many harmful diseases. For example, A person at an age of between 40-50 are getting Uncurable disease like Cancer. Research and development in Medical field have helped to combat with such Diseases, otherwise mortality rate would have increased to a higher rate.
However, Living a long life with the help of a Medical technology can be a curse for people suffering from multiple diseases, physical and mental strain, undergoing pain on a daily Basis.
Life is a beautiful gift and everyone deserves to live happy and healthy and for as long as anyone desires.
- Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational,otherwise they are a complete waste of time.Do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience. 82
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 11
- In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. SOme people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years. But other people think everyone should have the freedom to choose where they work. 56
- Some people prefer activities and lifestyle in hot climates while others prefer activities and lifestyle in cold climate. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- Medical technology helps to live long life. Is that curse or blessing for society and mankind? 55
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...generation it is 80-85 years. People now a days are falling ill at an very early stage...
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Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ration it is 80-85 years. People now a days are falling ill at an very early stage...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... People now a days are falling ill at an very early stage of their life and a...
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Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... People now a days are falling ill at an very early stage of their life and are...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll at an very early stage of their life and are getting exposed to many harmful ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 20.9802955665 10% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 1207.87684729 65% => OK
No of words: 165.0 242.827586207 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78787878788 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.92707691288 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52456071332 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 379.143842365 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2513281881 50.4703680194 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.857142857 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286520729404 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117367068519 0.0925447433944 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107490155812 0.071462118173 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180170048224 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10667569733 0.0609392437508 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 55.0591133005 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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