In many countries the governement spends a lot of money on the internet network.
Some people believe it isn't a right decision. Do you agree or disagree?
In an age of increasingly developing informatization, governments are willing to spend on a large scale for internet network. Contribution to internet supply causes national flourishment in the area of tourism and economy. Although this phenomenon may be possible to the insufficient budget of other factors, I completely agree that allocating money to internet access is the best option to face with the Fourth industrial revolution.
Some people say that exhausting too much money on internet infrastructure is not a reasonable decision. In addition to this factor, there are many urgent sectors that citizens have undergone. For example, when it comes to employment, most of the graduates couldn't get a job though they earn a prestigious university certification. Therefore, the policy-makers should turn their eyes to the acute problem.
However, it is possible to fall behind than any other countries. That is because many nations are pumping into internet service to attract foreign travelers. For instance, the survey said that South Korea is the fastest internet speed in the world. Surely, it may have an important role in the good impression to holidaymakers. Consequently, this advantage should be utilized to attract more tourists. To do so, IT development has to be proceded.
For the reason mentioned above, I absolutely agree with the opinion that most of the national budget should be consumed for computer market, because this helps economy t be increased, especially tourism sector. Furthermore, the more IT has grown, the better reputation our country may get.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40725806452 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13735331483 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2226875794 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5333333333 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154718238014 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470112612592 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050132785174 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880693067681 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421739305656 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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