In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other
concerns.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.
Economic growth is prioritized by the state in many nations and other issues are ignored. This essay will discuss the benefit of raising the living standards of citizens and the drawback of compromised civilian's health.
Increasing the level of economic growth brings more revenue to a country. Therefore, this money is used to open new business in a state and as a result more employment opportunities are provided to its people. This leads to more earnings by citizens and their living standards are uplifted and the country becomes more wealthy. For example, in 2005, India's economic growth was increased by 15%, as a result, unemployment rate was declined by 2% compared to past 5 years.
The disadvantage of civilian's health sufferings from new emerging diseases is due to ignoring the healthcare system development. The government does not provide funds to this sector, and due to this, there is a lack of new technologies and new medicines to treat these new illness. As a result, people suffer more than before. For instance, in 2020, due to fewer breathing machines in Indian hospitals, people are suffering a lot from new Covid-19 disease as Indian government ignored to purchase these machines.
In conclusion, although prioritizing the economic growth by a number of states raises the living standards of their citizens, it also brings the drawback of citizen's health sufferings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17256637168 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87049486647 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557522123894 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.39409468 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.272727273 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119823886794 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515581515226 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529801317298 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810374565994 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422438127676 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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