In many countries, the governments likes to spend more money on the arts. Some people agree with this. However, others think government should spend more on health and education.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is believed that goverments should spend more money on arts in some part of the world to improve artistic inclination while others argued that health and education are more necessary to focus to help the living standard in some countries rise up . This essay will discuss both views but in my view point , health and schooling must be central point .
First and foremost , the crux of the matter in the need for suitable solution to deal with uneducated and health issues in many countries that government need to focus to improve . There are many children have a sense of joying schools but there are not enough facilities and infrastructure fo=or children to go to school so many juveniles are facing with knowledge missing . Moreover , medical industry must be funded to installed advanced equipments to help the patients go though their sickness and improve the society . Thus , health and education are focal point for governments to fund money .
However , the development of imagionation though art pictures also play a vital role in artistic development countries . An art picture can demonstrate politics sides and many problems related to our life which are main factors to society development . Additionally , arts can contribute to the economic growth with its own values .
In conclusion , each view has their own values to society that governments need to focus and their contribution unmatched each other . I believe that art and education should be fund rather than arts with some main reasons aboved .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in fact, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13414634146 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7393016502 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577235772358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0272978313 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.818181818 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320976337341 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105800429767 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780841335678 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176078652088 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733721133923 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.