In many countries, it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that smoking in public place is a common issue faced by almost every country in the world. Most of the countries have enacted strict laws banning smoking in open places. If they wish to smoke, there are designated smoking zones where they will need to go. I completely agree with this point of view as there are innocent passive smokers also who inhale the smoke and are affected by it.
In my opinion, smoking has so many bad effects on the health. To list out it is the primary cause of cancer, lungs problems and other respiratory problems. Smoking in public places will cause innocent people who are standing by to inhale the smoke. This will result in various health problems for the entire section of the society. Smokers should always remember that they are creating a bad role model especially for the younger generation.
On the other hand, it would be inconvenient for them to step out of their houses or offices every time they feel like smoking. Although smoking is a hard habit to break this ban on public speaking will certainly force them to reduce smoking. Moreover, it will be a benefit to the government as the waste generated due to smoking will also be very less.
To conclude, smoking has many negative effects on health of both the smoker and those around him and it also is hazardous to the nature. In my opinion, the countries which ban smoking of cigarettes in public places are taking the right measure to prevent and protect public health and safety.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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...ices every time they feel like smoking. Although smoking is a hard habit to break this b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67424242424 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31891204581 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55303030303 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7439953549 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.1428571429 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291786990818 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107223136811 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850674891986 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183431684273 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799154743504 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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