Universally crime rate has increased. All over the world, more and more incidences of crime are being reported. The nature of the crime has also become more violent. This essay will discuss why the crime has increased and what can be done about it.
Crime rate has been on the rise throughout the world. There are various reasons, the main being poverty. Population is increasing along with poverty. Hence, many jobless / unemployed people commit crimes to feed their family. Criminal activities are more common in undeveloped areas than in developed areas because of poverty and unemployment. Crime is by no means a source of income, but when the environment is filled with criminal tendencies, the incidences of crime increase.
Numerous measures can be adopted to address the rise / increase in crime rate. The first is to educate the people about the side effects of conviction and how it will have an impact not only on the individual but also the whole family. In addition, the government should conduct workshops to raise awareness about the importance of education for children. Also, poor people should be provided with employment so as to distract them from criminal activity and help them earn income from ethical means. An idle mind is a devil’s workshop, hence being occupied in various activities helps in bringing down the crime rate.
In conclusion, no matter how genuine the reason is crime by no means can be justified. This essay discussed why the crime rate has increased and what measures can be taken to stop it. Everybody deserves a second chance, at least on humanitarian grounds the criminals should be given an opportunity to correct their wrongdoings to lead a better life so that this world becomes crime free one day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 410, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ople should be provided with employment so as to distract them from criminal activity an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, as to, at least, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01369863014 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62956629671 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571917808219 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5583263201 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3333333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393353032126 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135729559869 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109442118548 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274838978813 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143404121352 0.056905535591 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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