In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is the case and what can be done about it?
Nowadays, many nations face an increasing crime rate and criminals are more and more violent. Apart from the outstandings which humans achieve, there still exists the darkside in their society.
Overpopulation and the inappropriate contents on the internet can be seen as prime culprits for the crime rate increase. Firstly, overpopulation is the main adversity for all countries over the world because it accounts for triggering social unrest such as terrorism, the short of food and water or unemployment. Thus, all aforementioned causes push the crime rate in all countries worldwide especially in the second and third countries. Finally, with the proliferation of the entertainment on the Internet and social platforms that comprise more violent contents may have more detrimental effects on people’s manners including youngster’s. This is to say that everyone possesses distortion behaviours who easily get deeper inside the world of crime. Therefore, 2 main reasons that are mentioned ought to have deleterious impact on the crime rate in many countries.
To pump down the crime rate, the root causes may be tackled by not only the government but also everyone. For example, overpopulation may be solved by every single government that they are able to do by their power. In general knowledge, the government might increase their citizens’ perception about contraceptive methods or family planning. Moreover, they have the ability to pull out all the stops to push their nation’s economy and create more careers for their people. With violent contents on the Internet and social media platforms, the government should impose a law to heavily fine whoever creates and produces all the entertainment products containing violent and irrelevant contents. In addition, parents play an indispensable role in protecting their children by manipulating all the websites that their children have the opportunity to access. Above all, to decrease the crime rate and create an ideal living environment, everyone is responsible for hindering all the crime in their society by their capability.
In conclusion, the darkside of development still appears among their life but with the one target being to make a better world for everyone, the people must cooperate together to erase all the crime from their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, third, thus, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41828254848 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00247108323 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556786703601 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2444060646 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206602564652 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077413288086 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609267922813 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136034941522 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512919004314 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.