In many countries more and more people are compating for a place to study in universities. Why does this happen? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In this cutting edge era, every one Wants to grab wall qualified digree as well as educationon, for getting position in well-known universities, students have to combat with their counter parts. Even though, in this essay, i will articulate, either the Conditions why students used to gravitate towards obtaining higher education or positive remification on Students holistic development.
Commencing with the most salient Couse behind this circumstances. As with the help of higher education students can easily get lucrative Job with hefty amount of money. most of the multi national Companies always hire to those studente, who have a great ability to do something in particular field. This might be because, in well known universities for getting enrollment student has to grab high percentage, which is a clue of computer wiz kid. for example, google CEO Sundar pichai, who had only got admission in IIT college but google company give him Job because on the base of his qualified pervious degree.meanwhile, in order to get whether great variations or availability of the subjects, people generally give their preference towards best universities. where from they can bestow benificial education, according to their study level.
However, a lot positive factors are associated with this phenomenona.first and foremost is that students have to make plans in their early age in terms of getting admission in College.The lurch of getting enrollment well-known college, they not only focus on their education, but also it develops there cognizant skills. furthermore, since the state of education has been flourishing by leaps and bounds, education instituations alle realize the sense of accountibillty to provide the better education leval along with Infrastructure, which is win win situation for both.
To conclude, although through the assistance of well qualified digree student can get job, it also helps in terms of Inhancing the skills of students in their earlier days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, as to, for example, in particular, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42071197411 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07102519288 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621359223301 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.4135371617 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.272727273 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116759358834 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482006301077 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358112330491 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068857946429 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446038420272 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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